Thursday, October 23, 2008

NHD: Thesis Statements

1) There are many different theories on why Amelia Earhart disappeared over the Pacific Ocean... but my partner and I are going to firure out which theory sounds more reasonable.

2) Many people from 1939- through today are still pointing out their views on how they think Amelia Earhart disappeared ... What my partner and I are going to find out which theory sounds more realistic or which the U.S was going through at the time to see if it links back or has something to do with Amelia's disappearance.

1 comment:

Mr. Ackerman said...

This is a great start. You need an introduction and revised thesis statement. Try to use an opening style that will grab the readers' attention.

Grade: Satisfactory